First three chapters uploaded!

Silver City has been released, with the first two chapters already available and the third one being uploaded now! Please read them and review them. Only on FanFiction.net. Thank you to alaxbird for being the only reviewer so far. I'm hoping to get more reviewers in, and there is also a major plot twist in Chapter 5, I think.

I don't have much more information to give, so you'll need to read it to find out. Maybe some teasers will satisify you: At least two known people will die, someone shockingly betrays others, Kyra and Wormy are connected...somehow, someone will fall into Champio's hands, someone will fall in love...twice, one of the people they fall in love will die, a villain recommends a hero as a speechwriter which comes into account later, a series of arena battles causes the deaths of many, a known Ratchet & Clank character's brother arrives, and how is Clank involved with a perillous and fatal gravity maze?

Yeah, some teasers there for ya. Might as well throw a question out there, so..."Who is your favourite Ratchet & Clank villain?"

/Chocoboy271

Working chapter titles and release dates

October! And releases dates for Silver City have been finished with the first two chapters being uploaded on November 1 (one in the morning, one in the afternoon) and the rest will be uploaded on a four day basis e.g. Chapter 3 on November 5, Chapter 4 on November 9 etc.

I have also decided to release the working chapter names for Silver City, although they may not be final:
1 - A New Home
2 - Lockdown
3 - The Escapers
4 - Evil Forces
5 - The Clock Tower
6 - Political Oppositions
7 - Slim and Svim
8 - The Underground Highways
9 - Power Play
10 - Fizzy
11 - Apples Falling
12 - Magenta Blood
13 - I Surrender
14 - Brutality
15 - Missing Link
16 - The Hot Springs
17 - Grind for the Future

I made these chapter names back earlier in the year while I was still working on Rise of the Uniposers, but I've changed many of them as they either spoiled some plot twists or were just plain unoriginal. Like Chapter 11 was previously called "Gravity Maze" but I then changed it to "Apples Falling", referencing Isaac Newton's revelation of gravity when he watched an apple fall from a tree.

Plus, two new characters have been woven into the story.
Svim Cognito - Slim's older brother, becomes involved with Corrina starting with Chapter 7
Mandy - A short flexible woman, also becomes involved and later friends with Corrina for the same reason as Svim.
On another note, I have been able to find a way to get Eric and Doris into the story, for completely different reasons. I have also demoted Eric from tritagonist to minor character, as he doesn't try to stop the lockdown. Doris has been demoted too, but only to minor protagonist, as she does do her part.

More information will be released as it gets close to November, with maybe some minor spoilers from early chapters, maybe a synopsis of a chapter or two, however I will not reveal the major plot twist from Chapter 5! You'll have to wait until November 13 until that chapter is released. After a recheck of release dates, it's definite that Chapter 17 (the final chapter) will be released on New Year's Eve.

2012, the start of my third project...

/Chocoboy271

It's a split, not a strike

I have finished what was supposed to be Chapter 4 of Silver City, but is now Chapter 5 because the split of Chapter 1 has happened. The paperwork is done, and Silver City now has 17 chapters instead of sixteen, but this may change if I don't have enough content for one chapter. I am now going to release some character information for Silver City, with all the notable characters you see in the story:

VERY MINOR SPOILERS
Ratchet - of course, he's the protagonist and the one who you stick with until the end
Angela Cross - one of the deuteragonists, who does something shocking in the later chapters
Guy Milligan - newspaper reporter, excellent leadership, and is the leader of the people who escape
Corrina Tars - the brawn of the group, loves to kill stuff, but is always worried about her child, Kyra
Kyra Tars - Corrina's child, only a year old, becomes important in the final chapters (I often forget to put her into parts of chapters)
Luci Ganley - the brains of the group, works at the Clock Tower and can hack into any computer
Wormy - Angela's Worm-droid, useful for espionage and also becomes important
Champio - the antagonist who puts Silver City under lockdown, trying to become Galactic President of Bogon
Doris - a triteragonist, Angela's best friend, still wondering how to add her to the storyline
Eric - a triteragonist, Angela's butcher, still wondering how to add him to the storyline
Other people met are Slim Cognito, Abercrombie Fizzwidget Bot, and maybe some other characters.
SPOILERS END HERE

Those are all of the notable characters so far, and I hope to post some more information soon, like a synopsis of the first few chapters. If there are any spoilers, I'll say so, but remember, only spoilers will be posted here.

/Chocoboy271

Problem

Okay, I must have a serious problem if I have already wrote the first three chapters in about five days! I guess the vacation part hasn't kicked in. Well...for me, this is kind of my vacation. Writing fanfiction. I love it. I'll probably get the whole story done before November, so that's why I have my FictionPress story cutting into that. I'm still thinking about cutting the first chapter into two, and I really want to do that expect there's no good cutting point in the middle. I'll think of something, so hopefully there'll be 17 chapters instead of 16 chapters. Okay, got to go, big rush.

/Chocoboy271

FictionPress story is a go!

I have recently decided to go ahead with the plan for my FictionPress story involving Mark Andrews. I originally considered scrapping the story and left its fate in the balance because I could not come up with a good ending, but now I have decided the ending and will be working on its outline soon. There is little information to give at the moment, because I have no idea of what is going to happen in the middle. All I know is that there's going to be a gang giving Mark a hard time while he tries to find out what happened in his past and what caused the plane he piloted to explode in mid-air. I'm also thinking of adding a government conspiracy somewhere, but at the moment, I can't be too sure. And of course, I need a title. That will be decided soon when I make the outline.

/Chocoboy271

RotU is finished!

Yes, yesterday I uploaded the final chapter of Rise of the Uniposers. It explains what happens after the explosion at the Backup Base and ends on a cliffhanger, leaving a pathway for a sequel if I ever want to write one, which I don't at the moment.

I'm planning to write Silver City over the next few months, with Chapter 1 already finished from previous work, and I am hoping to upload Chapter 1 early November, and try to get the story finished January, meaning I should upload around 5 or 6 chapters a month. During the hiatus I will try and finish at least up to Chapter 10, and I will also be taking a vacation from FanFiction writing until November.

By the way, I do not have an obsession with Angela, it's just her disappearance stemmed good storylines. Also, I'm in love with the second game and the Bogon Galaxy. Now, I'm going to ask you an opinion-based question to get some comments.

"What is your favourite planet from Ratchet & Clank?"

Personally, my favourite is Notak for some reason. I don't why, I just like its darkness and the canals going across the city....in Canal City....

Anyway, leave a response, and I'll see you next time I have some info.

/Chocoboy271

Chapter 24 is near!

I have almost finished Chapter 24 of Rise of the Uniposers, leaving Chapter 25 as the Epilogue. I was actually going to have the final battle finished in Chapter 24, but I decided to leave a cliffhanger instead, with the actual end on Chapter 25. I have to admit, Rise of the Uniposers wasn't very good. It started off a crappy idea that I tried to save but I probably failed. I mean, Qwark doesn't even have to be in the story, he's just a filler character.

After Rise of the Uniposers, I'll take a long break, frequently working on Silver City, the next FanFiction story to be released. About the Fiction Press story, I'm a bit iffy on whether I should go with it. But I do have my third FanFiction story in mind. It is a Harry Potter fanfiction...that is all I'm going to say. Anyway, for anyone whose waiting for Silver City, here's a sneak preview:

Angela climbed away from the window and ran straight back into her apartment, and saw Wormy sitting on the chair, unsure of what was going on. She stormed into the bathroom and pulled out all the drawers, grabbing the clothes she needed. She got back up and went to her bedroom, and grabbed her photos and mementos, and then pulled a suitcase from under her bed and stuffed everything inside. She walked back out into the living room, and then heard the door creaking.

“Hello?” she asked fearfully, as she dropped the suitcase softly. Slowly, as the door began to creak open even more, Angela edged to the side of the room and sidled to behind the door. Eventually, the door opened fully and almost immediately she turned around and pushed her leg backwards, grabbing the intruder’s neck and she pushed herself with them to the ground, and prepared to punch them before she saw who it was.

This story is going to be much more...uhh...stable than Rise of the Uniposers, and due to some people concerned about the long chapters, I might be splitting the first chapter into two, but probably not. All the chapters afterwards will be fairly short. I felt Rise of the Uniposers had too many characters for too long of a time. That's why there's two (technically three, but the third is barely noticable, and yes, that is Wormy, Angela's pet Worm-Droid) characters in the first chapter, five at the end of the second (technically six, but yet another unnoticable character, which is a baby making the true count seven), four about two chapters later, then three around the tenth chapter, two shortly after that and after a couple more chapters, back to three which will stay that way until the end.

Long post, because I haven't updated in months, so this will cover all of the new stuff I'm talking about. Haydos out!

/Chocoboy271

EDIT: For some unknown reason, the font changes in the middle of the text. I'm trying to fix this, but if I can't just bear with the new font. 

EDIT: Font fixed.

First FictionPress story in the works!

I have planned my first FictionPress story, and I've already created a crappy synopsis:

Mark Andrews woke up in a hospital bed. A package laid on top of him with a note from a man named Joseph. He can only remember one thing about his past: flying a passenger plane which mysteriously exploded in mid-air, leaving the only survivor. He is soon told he was a well-known pilot, famous for preventing three air crash disasters. He is challenged by a widespread gang in the city of Corinar due to unknown events that happened in his dark past, determined for pay revenge for said events...

The synopsis could have been better, but the story is pretty straight forward. I have some plans for the plot, but nothing solid yet for where it ends up.

In FanFiction.net news, Chapter 21 of Rise of the Uniposers has been released. The story is coming to close and will end on Chapter 25, leaving me room to start my FictionPress story and Silver City.

/Chocoboy271

Blog and Name Change

As many of you know, I changed the name of Finding Angela to Rise of the Uniposers. Along with that, my pen name has been changed from noobie444 to Haydos271, which is now my widespread name across the net. I have released a blog so I will be able to tell my fans about notifications, so hopefully you'll check often to see new info. Once you have recieved my message about this, I hope you will take the time to read and review Chapter 20, which has just been released.

Lately, my friend Clank5678, who has helped me countless times move Rise of the Uniposers, has sadly departed FanFiction.net and is now concentrating on FictionPress. I have also joined FictionPress under the name Haydos271, but I will not be as active on that as much as FanFiction.net, but I will occasionally release some stories, usually oneshots, on that site. In other news, Rise of the Uniposers is coming to a close, and will end on Chapter 25, and thankfully I'll be able to move onto my much more balanced and well thought out story, Silver City.

If you are a reviewer of my story, you will get a mention from me on this blog, and if any new people start reviewing, I'll mention their names too. So far the reviewers have been: Clank5678, Tina Tissue, Geinea Lombax (create an account, will ya?), BigKingZeus, Liger of Destruction, Ratchet Thunderfire, and now for two people who reviewed my first chapter only, sambeckett271 and destinationzer0. Hopefully, you will continue to read my blog, and so I bid you farewell for this post.

P.S. Please refer to me as Haydos271, as Chocoboy271 is my name for my Google Account that I quickly threw together.