Saturday, 20 August 2011

Chapter 24 is near!

I have almost finished Chapter 24 of Rise of the Uniposers, leaving Chapter 25 as the Epilogue. I was actually going to have the final battle finished in Chapter 24, but I decided to leave a cliffhanger instead, with the actual end on Chapter 25. I have to admit, Rise of the Uniposers wasn't very good. It started off a crappy idea that I tried to save but I probably failed. I mean, Qwark doesn't even have to be in the story, he's just a filler character.

After Rise of the Uniposers, I'll take a long break, frequently working on Silver City, the next FanFiction story to be released. About the Fiction Press story, I'm a bit iffy on whether I should go with it. But I do have my third FanFiction story in mind. It is a Harry Potter fanfiction...that is all I'm going to say. Anyway, for anyone whose waiting for Silver City, here's a sneak preview:

Angela climbed away from the window and ran straight back into her apartment, and saw Wormy sitting on the chair, unsure of what was going on. She stormed into the bathroom and pulled out all the drawers, grabbing the clothes she needed. She got back up and went to her bedroom, and grabbed her photos and mementos, and then pulled a suitcase from under her bed and stuffed everything inside. She walked back out into the living room, and then heard the door creaking.
“Hello?” she asked fearfully, as she dropped the suitcase softly. Slowly, as the door began to creak open even more, Angela edged to the side of the room and sidled to behind the door. Eventually, the door opened fully and almost immediately she turned around and pushed her leg backwards, grabbing the intruder’s neck and she pushed herself with them to the ground, and prepared to punch them before she saw who it was.

This story is going to be much more...uhh...stable than Rise of the Uniposers, and due to some people concerned about the long chapters, I might be splitting the first chapter into two, but probably not. All the chapters afterwards will be fairly short. I felt Rise of the Uniposers had too many characters for too long of a time. That's why there's two (technically three, but the third is barely noticable, and yes, that is Wormy, Angela's pet Worm-Droid) characters in the first chapter, five at the end of the second (technically six, but yet another unnoticable character, which is a baby making the true count seven), four about two chapters later, then three around the tenth chapter, two shortly after that and after a couple more chapters, back to three which will stay that way until the end.

Long post, because I haven't updated in months, so this will cover all of the new stuff I'm talking about. Haydos out!

/Chocoboy271

EDIT: For some unknown reason, the font changes in the middle of the text. I'm trying to fix this, but if I can't just bear with the new font. 

EDIT: Font fixed.